[csw-maintainers] Press release, English translation

[Ben Walton]

Excerpts from Othmar Wigger's message of Tue Jan 13 10:54:11 -0500 2009:

Hi Othmar,

I'd offer only a small correction. :)

Paragraph 1:

> legal reconstitution, because of last summer's breakup, which had 
> paralyzed the project during several months.

legal reconstitution, due to last summer's breakup, which saw the
project paralyzed for several months.

[I also suggest clarifying that the breakup was with blastwave or
rewording this to something like: due to last summers internal
turmoil, which had paralyzed...  Others should maybe comment on this
change though.]

HTH,
-Ben
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