[csw-devel] SF.net SVN: gar:[18160] csw/mgar/pkg/opencsw-manual/trunk/files/ for-administrators/introduction.rst

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Revision: 18160
          http://gar.svn.sourceforge.net/gar/?rev=18160&view=rev
Author:   wahwah
Date:     2012-05-29 16:03:55 +0000 (Tue, 29 May 2012)
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Introduction style changes

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Modified: csw/mgar/pkg/opencsw-manual/trunk/files/for-administrators/introduction.rst
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--- csw/mgar/pkg/opencsw-manual/trunk/files/for-administrators/introduction.rst	2012-05-29 15:02:26 UTC (rev 18159)
+++ csw/mgar/pkg/opencsw-manual/trunk/files/for-administrators/introduction.rst	2012-05-29 16:03:55 UTC (rev 18160)
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 Introduction
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-System administrators have to work with software every day. Solaris brings
-more and more programs with every release. However, the world of open source is
-big and there is always missing something. OpenCSW fills this gap by providing
-a large amount of precompiled software and open source build recipes.
-The packages can be installed comfortably with automatic dependency resolution
-but require root access to the machine. If you really want to compile your
-own software, the build recipes are available for all packages too.
+The world of open source is big. Although Solaris releases do contain the
+software companion disc, there's always more projects out there that can fit
+there.
 
-Solaris 10 is fully supported. Solaris 8 and 9 get best effort support level.
-As of January 2012, Solaris 8 catalogs do not get any updates, and Solaris
-9 catalogs get some amount of updates.
+OpenCSW fills this gap by providing binary packages, together with their build
+recipes.  The packages can be installed comfortably with automatic dependency
+resolution, and require root access to the machine. If you want to compile and
+build packages on your own, the build recipes are available for all packages
+too.
+
+Solaris 10 is fully supported. Solaris 8 and 9 only get best effort support
+level.  As of January 2012, Solaris 8 catalogs do not get any updates, and
+Solaris 9 catalogs only get some amount of updates.

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